The Players (Cameo) Poem by lady grace

The Players (Cameo)

Rating: 4.7


players
on the board online
queen to queen, in rook..open king
focusing
concentration for the next moves
exchanging nice killing shift
checkmate


(this is for ian and me..to carl harris, thank you for coaching me about cameo...kissessssss)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C. P. Sharma 20 August 2009

A strange checkmate game. CP

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Miriam Maia Padua 20 August 2009

Chess game... a friendship bond... checkmate in friendship.. Play with me too, my friend... 10++ for this nice piece... Lovelots, Maia

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Catrina Heart 21 August 2009

I tried playing chess though I didnt have the patience in learning it, maybe i love more of outdoor sports that's why....lovely still! ! ! To Ian well with Grace's poem i might rethink of learning chess once more...only you should have a very long patience if you are going to teach me.....: 0)

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Noel Horlanda 21 August 2009

The same here as the other one - start game. So this cameo style, I think this style is easier to write compared to a haiku. Could you compose a longer version so that your reader would enjoy more, please...?

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Rajaram Ramachandran 21 August 2009

Every game has its own tempo, provided one takes keen interest in it.

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Merna Ibrahim 26 August 2009

Nice poem indeed...as usual! !

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Eyan Desir 25 August 2009

Good write I hope Ian likes it... and the coach.............haha.....

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Shashendra Amalshan 24 August 2009

very creative! ! ! ! ! Hey what is this about.. online chess! ! ! ! yeah now since you are the queen, no one can check mate you! ! ! May be some other queen checkmate the king you like! ! ! lolss anyway I really liked the idea behind this one.... 10++ lovess Shan//

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 22 August 2009

for what it stands as cymbolic, i could not fathom. can you enlighten me? shan

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Nikunj Sharma 22 August 2009

indeed a weet, meaningful write..........10 from me...I love chess, its an amazing game of patience, hiding your motives, making moves to distract the opposition, etc...good poem

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