Where from will this flow into me
from what, from whom.from where
where from will this flow into you
from a stone worn on hand would it
from a shrine claiming divine would it
from one who claims to be divine himself would it
one through his yogic penance...claims
to have got this energies essence..captued
into a 'linga' in his premises...A SHRINE
a serene and calm place it is
the music of the flute there...did almost
put me to sleep in my trying to meditate
YET..A CAPTURED ENERGY DID NOT SEEM POSITIVE
EVEN TO THE SMALL 'me'
on my way back....a stop over
amidst the woods near a river..the uncaptured
chill river on my feet and breeze on my chest touched my soul
still live, free and positive are they
a captured... even if shrined and serene
POSITIVE ENERGY is'nt there i feel
IT IS 'CAUGHT' WITHIN ME
IT IS 'FREE' BEYOND ME
IT IS ALL AROUND WAITING FOR ME
THIS POSITIVE ENERGY
True, the divine or cosmic energy is in and around us...good attempt
'a serene and calm place it is the music of the flute there...did almost put me to sleep in my trying to meditate'..positive energies are alwys coming from our positive vibrations...naizz
Yes as Indira says we are surrounded by cosmic energy......the focus of this poem..good write
well crafted with your own positive energy ++10.. from my own humble self I believe the biggest charge of positive energy comes from which I send to you is a SMILE''' regards
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
the science of energy in poetic application to life.........beyond explanation...10+++