The Rumors Poem by Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh

The Rumors



You don't want see my face
For the mistakes I made
Now you want to make me cry
Or want to see me dead
I heard something very bad
About your character
I didn't want to believe it
But it made me suffer
Someone used to say those things
It was so convincing
And you were like deaf and dumb
You weren't protesting
Baby it was not my fault
I can swear upon God
Since it was so insulting
Please beat me with a rod
But forget it forgive me
You can make it okay
I won't make you cry again
Please believe what I say

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazel Durham 02 October 2012

A great heartfelt poem so deeep and powerful!

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Nurain Ali-balogun 28 September 2012

You sounded like those things you pointed out are really rumours, and you were trying to convince her not to focus on them. All in all, it is a good and well-written poem, and a delighful read.

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Solmon Jejemore Gbemiga 28 September 2012

This is what I call a sober poem, really good and forgivable. I wish u are forgiven, Asif.

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Payal Parande 28 September 2012

simple but splendid....this piece is full of emotions and brilliantly written indeed, thank you for sharing love payal

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Kelvin Owusu 28 September 2012

I liked this piece expresses what i call whispers in the wind, words linger, captures the ear in a different context, nicely written

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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