Shalom Freedman

Bronze Star - 2,762 Points (Troy New York)

The Smaller The Poem - Poem by Shalom Freedman

Dickinson you love
Brief Blake you favor
Little Menashe
And Haiku you savor

The smaller the poem
The fewer the lines
More surer remembered
As heart of the mind.


Comments about The Smaller The Poem by Shalom Freedman

  • Rookie some body (3/13/2008 4:57:00 AM)

    i liked ur poem very much very precise and straight to the point

    keep writing
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  • Rookie Anita Atina (2/6/2008 2:34:00 AM)

    Ne'er a truer words said,
    When heart and mind read as one,
    Less is more
    And its done!

    Cheers
    Anita (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lime and Tequila with a Splash of Pineapple (2/5/2008 11:12:00 PM)

    You speak a lot of truth, though not universal, often the reality. I'm glad I got a chance to read this poem. I look forward to reading more of your work. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, February 5, 2008



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