The Story Of Us **3** Poem by diana rose tolentino

The Story Of Us **3**



God grant me a moment that changed my life
Along with yours when victory came at last
I never gave you up, now I get what I want
A picture of you and I together came to life

Now that we’re together, we live up the smiles
Tender looks can now be found in our eyes
We had overcame the hardest trials of our love
Not a bad story to tell, the story of us.
And before the tender tides, we solemnly deliver our vows

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ency Bearis 04 October 2011

Nice ending, well crafted thought. Lovely.

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 04 October 2011

hay, i overlooked your 3rd. oh so this is the next chapter of the story it is happy ending after all amazing i am happy you see, if bad things happend already no more sadness to come for they have been experienced ahead HAPPY ENDING! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Vipins Puthooran 03 October 2011

It's a nice poem... Great expressions of feelings

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