The Sunshine Poem by DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK

The Sunshine



The stars twinkle afar
Dancing in the iridescent night sky
And in the presence of shimmering stars
The horizon looks darker
And the years longer
In the silence of the night
I look out
In thirsting longing eyes
And see as if you are going past
Then I think of you
As you linger on my mind always
And that looks like a mirage
Haunting me in tears
Ensouled on hope, love
And memory for years
A world once golden now looks barren
The skies once azure now looks leaden
You are life
You are sunshine
You are faith
You are hope
You are my breath and my heaven
You give me peace sublime
It pains to open eyes
When you are not beside
So in closing my eyes
I see you shining
Like an eternal sunshine

Wednesday, October 29, 2014
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Wilkins 29 October 2014

you are sunshine so in closing my eyes you are eternal sunshine lovely

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Heather Wilkins 29 October 2014

you are sunshine so in closing my eyes you are eternal sunshine lovely

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Valsa George 30 October 2014

A world once golden now looks barren The skies once azure now looks leaden A lovely poem with beautiful description of the night sky and the regret of having lost the company of someone dear and the passionate longing to reinstate that presence! Enjoyed!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 October 2014

Star twinkles afar with dancing and I see you shining like an eternal sunshine. Very beautiful poem composed.

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Geetha Jayakumar 30 October 2014

Beautiful poem with fantastic lines..... So in closing my eyes I see you shining Like an eternal sunshine Loved reading it.

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Amitava Sur 30 October 2014

A beautiful description of a starry night, comforting the mind with peace. You are faith You are hope You are my breath and my heaven You give me peace sublime .... very nice

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 30 October 2014

lovely write Deepak, soothes the soul.

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Salini Nair 30 October 2014

eager to see the sunshine that miss in the shadows......................beautiful poem...like it

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