Mihaela Pirjol


The Touch Of Love (Senryu)


a pure young heart form
from a quick drop of water
metamorphosing

Submitted: Monday, August 18, 2014
Edited: Tuesday, October 14, 2014

Topic(s): senryu


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  • Veteran Poet - 3,232 Points Mihaela Pirjol (9/29/2014 6:38:00 AM)

    Thank you, Mr. Brick.
    The images are juxtaposed, and various meanings derive from their symbols -for intentional free interpretation (Unfinished Poetry) .

    To me that drop of water though, was a real-life experience. Mihaela Pirjol (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 4,487 Points Daniel Brick (9/29/2014 5:22:00 AM)

    Four readers wrote comments on this poem but not one of them addressed the meaning! I have to admit I'm still left out of this poem - I don't understand the images - What is that drop of water? and What metamorphosis has taken place? I have too high a regard for your poetry, for everyone's poetry to pretend to understand when I don't. Besides with the poet herself just a click away, an explanation is so easy to get! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 402 Points Anthony Burkett (8/18/2014 1:26:00 PM)

    The depth at which these short lines strike at the heart cord is surprising indeed! VERY well done poetess. (Report) Reply

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