Learn More

Mihaela Pirjol


The Touch Of Love (Senryu)


a pure young heart form
from a quick drop of water
metamorphosing

Submitted: Monday, August 18, 2014
Edited: Tuesday, October 14, 2014

Topic of this poem: senryu


Do you like this poem?
0 person liked.
0 person did not like.

Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Comments about this poem (The Touch Of Love (Senryu) by Mihaela Pirjol )

Enter the verification code :

  • Veteran Poet - 4,078 Points Mihaela Pirjol (9/29/2014 6:38:00 AM)

    Thank you, Mr. Brick.
    The images are juxtaposed, and various meanings derive from their symbols -for intentional free interpretation (Unfinished Poetry) .

    To me that drop of water though, was a real-life experience. Mihaela Pirjol (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 5,293 Points Daniel Brick (9/29/2014 5:22:00 AM)

    Four readers wrote comments on this poem but not one of them addressed the meaning! I have to admit I'm still left out of this poem - I don't understand the images - What is that drop of water? and What metamorphosis has taken place? I have too high a regard for your poetry, for everyone's poetry to pretend to understand when I don't. Besides with the poet herself just a click away, an explanation is so easy to get! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 408 Points Anthony Burkett (8/18/2014 1:26:00 PM)

    The depth at which these short lines strike at the heart cord is surprising indeed! VERY well done poetess. (Report) Reply

Read all 6 comments »

Trending Poets

Trending Poems

  1. Still I Rise, Maya Angelou
  2. Daffodils, William Wordsworth
  3. Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening, Robert Frost
  4. The Road Not Taken, Robert Frost
  5. A Child's Christmas in Wales, Dylan Thomas
  6. Do Not Go Gentle Into That Good Night, Dylan Thomas
  7. If You Forget Me, Pablo Neruda
  8. I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings, Maya Angelou
  9. Fire and Ice, Robert Frost
  10. Invictus, William Ernest Henley

Poem of the Day

poet Emily Jane Brontë

I am the only being whose doom
No tongue would ask no eye would mourn
I never caused a thought of gloom
A smile of joy since I was born

In secret pleasure - secret tears
...... Read complete »

   

New Poems

  1. Life Dances, Col Muhamad Khalid Khan
  2. Looking Kyle In the Eyes, Kyle Schlicher
  3. Besten Dank für den Gruss, Wolfgang Steinmann
  4. Birthday poem, Wala' Qamhieh
  5. If you want to be my inspirer, Elius Rubby
  6. Being in love, Sahra Hussein
  7. Walk On!, Shweta Nair
  8. My Father, Sahra Hussein
  9. Crime against humanity (a prose poem), paul bamberger
  10. Serenity Later Prayer, Joseph DeMarco
[Hata Bildir]