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The unspoken murmurs

Cry Hard!
Tears on your face, a remedy for the drought.
Cry Hard!
That it seems your body is turning inside out.
Cry!
Until every last drop of emotion is wrung out of you.
Cry!
Become undone... tears of fire, agony, & blue.

Submitted: Wednesday, March 06, 2013

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  • Guess Who (3/15/2013 4:43:00 PM)

    Nice poem, Very moving and emotional Good write. GuessWho

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  • Aria Siren (3/14/2013 10:01:00 AM)

    I like this one. Short poems can hit even more powerfully and this one does.

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  • Jesus James Llorico (3/13/2013 6:34:00 AM)

    poems are written from the heart, in this poem, i felt you are experiencing this lament, nice poem. well written, keep it up

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  • Persian Khushi (3/12/2013 4:43:00 PM)

    wow an excellent write. many of us can relate. beautifully crafted POETESS.. :) this this is what you are!

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  • Jillian Ward (3/12/2013 8:55:00 AM)

    Many a time can I relate. Nicely written.

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  • Leila Ewing (3/10/2013 9:14:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem :) reads nicely

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  • Jahan Zeb (3/7/2013 7:44:00 AM)

    MashALLAH. An array of nice thought.

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  • Sallam Yassin (3/6/2013 12:46:00 PM)

    wise and spiritually, touching the heart
    keep composing
    U are (the golden light)

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  • Aswath Raman (3/6/2013 11:20:00 AM)

    Very elegant work sister! I feel you have written your soul!

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  • adil Khan (3/6/2013 10:52:00 AM)

    wow so touching lines.keep it up: -)

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