Sameera Alshaikh

The Unspoken Murmurs - Poem by Sameera Alshaikh

Cry Hard!
Tears on your face, a remedy for the drought.
Cry Hard!
That it seems your body is turning inside out.
Until every last drop of emotion is wrung out of you.
Become undone... tears of fire, agony, & blue.

Comments about The Unspoken Murmurs by Sameera Alshaikh

  • Rookie - 83 Points Guess Who (3/15/2013 4:43:00 PM)

    Nice poem, Very moving and emotional Good write. GuessWho (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Aria Siren (3/14/2013 10:01:00 AM)

    I like this one. Short poems can hit even more powerfully and this one does. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,637 Points Jesus James Llorico (3/13/2013 6:34:00 AM)

    poems are written from the heart, in this poem, i felt you are experiencing this lament, nice poem. well written, keep it up (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 120 Points Persian Khushi (3/12/2013 4:43:00 PM)

    wow an excellent write. many of us can relate. beautifully crafted POETESS.. :) this this is what you are! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jillian Ward (3/12/2013 8:55:00 AM)

    Many a time can I relate. Nicely written. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 402 Points Leila A (3/10/2013 9:14:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem :) reads nicely (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 96 Points Jahan Zeb (3/7/2013 7:44:00 AM)

    MashALLAH. An array of nice thought. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,440 Points Sallam Yassin (3/6/2013 12:46:00 PM)

    wise and spiritually, touching the heart
    keep composing
    U are (the golden light) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points adil Khan (3/6/2013 10:52:00 AM)

    wow so touching lines.keep it up: -) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, March 6, 2013

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