If death can take away a loved one,
then it can also.
Take away a life time happiness.
If to love could lead to heartbreaks,
it can also,
lead to death.
If heartbreaks could bring in fustrations,
just because you loved,
then it could also,
lead to failure.
If 1 thousand miles is just taken as,
wait and take,
then wait and take,
would lead to 10 million miles ahead.
And with all these you still say that,
life is sweet?
Thanks for the honor given to me. Your poem is really very nice. What all you have written is true.
Greetings. I learnt much about the connectedness of experience in your poem. I rili enjoyed the instant effect of ur words in describing d uncertainty of life
Greetings. I learnt much about the connectedness of experience in your poem. I rili enjoyed the instant effect of ur words in describing d uncertainty of life
I think the first line is supposed to read If death can take away a loved one. To find the sublimity that leads to the realization that life is indeed sweet, we have to got past the pain, a most difficult maneuver in some cases. I enjoy the poem, thanks for the invite
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Another nice poem, keep the good work up...