Just like children jokelly pour sand on their head
like bees fly into webs in their search for food
just like a young lion fall into the crocodiles den while searching for it's drinking water
it was so hectic to bear, so loving to keep
and so emotional to make.
But we never understood that it's going to be killing, so bad and denty to our lives.
Right there under the oak tree on a blue saturday night
a night filled with emotion, compassion, love and promises
together we held our hand bearing only one key
the so called key of love
together we shared some passion, promise and
also together we locked the key oathically.
We were so carried by the wind of the night
filled with love, so sensitive by our hearts,
that we couldn't think of nothing else than
to have it done.
But lastly do we realize it all
the misfortune it caused and all it brought to our lives
it was a great mistake so ever
oh! God help us to unlock the key of love.
so religious..i like your attitude and point of view about life...very nice self expression..
im touch by every word in this poem i love this poem dearly very beautiful
Good imagery. Key of love. I wish we all see love as a key, so that we make and handle it carefully.
It's interesting and pretty easy to read, which is nice. I also like that it's not overly long.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A very nice poem, keep it up