Treasure Island

VIPINS PUTHOORAN


The Wren


If thou wert my only wren,
I'd make a golden dome then;
As thy nest o'er my lorn skies
To hear thy song as I arise
Wilt thou comest, when I call?
Perching on the fence of my hall
Hast thou hidden inside thy brownish bill-
A love song for my heart to fill?
Wilt thou show me thy rage
If I caress thine brown plumage?
Thy life at a fast, restless and song too:
Thou comest to my garden as new,
And singest except the song of adieu: : :

Submitted: Monday, July 23, 2012
Edited: Sunday, December 22, 2013

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  • Saadat Tahir (8/26/2012 1:08:00 AM)

    wooo...wow mate
    you done a beauty there
    classical, charming and very stylish....you can rightly take pride in this....brings to mind some great old poems...

    cheers
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  • Swetha Vanakayalapati (8/2/2012 9:24:00 AM)

    believe me..........very rich in meaning like a delicious dish with all nutritive values..........
    like you always say......TOP MARKS! ! ! ........ (Report) Reply

  • Hans Vr (7/26/2012 10:31:00 AM)

    This is a suberb poem, Vipins. Heart warming, very peotic and such a pleasure to read.
    Excellent! (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath (7/26/2012 10:19:00 AM)

    Rhythmic and deep.No, adieu, no parting.Immortal bird will take.But, it will be singing ever with its cocked tail. (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (7/23/2012 9:12:00 PM)

    The best, I think you should never stop writing, and hope by releasing three new poems, your desire to do poetry will be flamed and activate your interest again...this poem is a great piece..do more_Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

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