Then You Happened Poem by Heather Burns

Then You Happened

Rating: 5.0


Others contained no depth
of purpose
their surface a thin like
shell
floating aimlessly in shallow
waters

Then you happened.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Wood 12 August 2013

A delightful poem. Some people are shallow indeed.

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Len Webster 13 August 2013

Effective. Short poems often carry more weight!

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Dave Walker 12 August 2013

A great poem, love how you have got the meaning into the poem.

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Unwritten Soul 12 August 2013

Great...this is a short but great work! _Soul

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Geetha Jayakumar 12 August 2013

Wow. Wonderful write..love goes much deeper..Loved reading it.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 12 August 2013

Many look good on surface. Love goes much deeper. Nicely said. Thank you.

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