They Want To Live! Poem by John Kipling Lewis

They Want To Live!

Rating: 3.2


By what means do they come to this desire I don't know...
but they want to live.

Even in the worst conditions; they bleed and burn and yet cling to life.

From the smallest child to the frailest man they are united in a desire to survive.

Why am I not like them?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
K Holoholo 06 November 2007

It's OK but maybe add a little more vision to it.

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Kath Moore 05 November 2007

2. Telling. Show us with details and images.

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