In life sometimes you're up
sometimes you're down
sometimes you win
sometimes you loose you crown
sometimes you survive
sometimes you drawn
In life sometimes you feel law
sometimes you feel high
sometimes you smile
sometimes you cry
in life sometimes your dreams come true
sometimes your dreams flew
sometimes it breakes all the hope and the thoughts you drew
sometimes it makes a strong relation that last forever between two
sometimes it takes friends and people we love and we knew
sometimes we forgot the pain
sometimes the pain grew
but this is the life
and we should go throw
I like the way you listed everything in life. It made me think alot about life. Great Job!
life is every thing and seldom nothing you better explain it well lola nice poem you too visit my poetry luwi
nice poem listing all the ups and downs in life... In life sometimes you feel law sometimes you feel high i think it should be ' low ' instead of law....
This is life...some poems are good some poems are bad Yours are good
a great write of the evolution of life....well presented, , , great job...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
so true! keep up the good work