This Love That Lies One Sided Poem by Ben Partenay

This Love That Lies One Sided



And I,
The traitor that I am
Have not a promise kept,
Nor have the birds flown backwards
Nor have the statues wept.

And I,
The devil that I am
Have not much more to give,
Nor can I offer kindness
Nor can I let this live.

And you,
The one eyed love,
Have not a promise kept
Nor has the clock spun backwards
Nor have I wept as yet.

But I,
With you and all my love,
Have a little heart that’s left
That you have not yet taken
That you have yet to get.

And I,
The beggar that I am
Am no more saint than soldier
But begged for what I dreamt
The love I thought you were.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lauren Michaels 27 September 2006

This is poem is genuinely captivating. Its fit to burst with heart and eloquence. Regards

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Ernestine Northover 12 September 2006

A delightful lilting poem, with a little old fashioned tinge to it. Lovely read and a really nice write. Enjoyed it immensely. Love Ernestine XXX

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Patricia Gale 11 September 2006

Love given but not return to met its fullest... a splendid heart felt read.

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