This Typhoon Poem by Obed dela Cruz

This Typhoon

Rating: 5.0


Stink was the smell of the atmosphere
And silent cries are all that you hear.
This typhoon brought heavy destruction
But there’s a sure hope for our nation.
We shall rise and possess our new sun!
Let us all do the best that we can!
We shall always wear our clean sandals!
This typhoon will never hinder us.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Poewhit 02 November 2009

Much inspiration. Nature can be cruel

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Ion Untaru 02 November 2009

very good poem, rated with 10.

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Fay Slimm 01 November 2009

This is a mature, appealing and very moving poetic achievement Obed and it does credit to your age and ability - - I rate this top marks and do keep writing - you have much yet to offer the reading public....10 from Fay

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*Shalimar ~ Mageswary* 30 October 2009

its very of its very nice but i just cant believe that u are still small but very intelegent keep it up

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 27 October 2009

memories of beloved and the lost ones. gorgeous!

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