Tho you see
As I fall
Love to be
As fate destined
Weeping and hurting
With unseen pain
Lashes of whips put by
Unknown hands
Blood is dripping
From life long scars
Hurting and tearing
My soul apart
Poison of loneliness
Runs in my veins
I want to grab heart
And rip it of my chest
wow, i love the way you described the pain and what you wanted to about it, to solve the problem.. it was marvelous 10! ~Hazel G.E
ufff! ! ! ! poision of loneliness grips my heart too -- I can see the pathos too very touching- 10+ love anjali
heart out of chest is no longer heart 'cause it does not beat - that beat is important, it is the beat we all dance to and the music comes from the heart too.
you seem to be very sad now. sometrhing is on your mind that is bothering you and due to that these verses are flowing out of your wounded heart.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
nice..very much full of pathos...keep writing what you feel.