Thoughts Poem by Sans Serif

Thoughts

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Why do we do this to
Each other?
Make promises we can't
Keep.
Mayhaps it's human
Tradition,
Perhaps they are to
Deep
And we can't find
The way to keep
Them ahold.
Mayhaps it's my
Fault
To promise what's not
In my control.
I beg to a higher
Being,
Give me the strength
I need to keep it to you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 02 September 2009

We make promises but what's the assurance that we'd not break it.We should ask ourselves if we're really that honest and honor.Good writes Matt.

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Dani Moore 02 September 2009

its a great poem well writen and so true great job

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