(15-10-1988 / Ghana)

What do you think this poem is about?

Thoughts Maybe

I think, therefore I am not
I can be nor can I not
I am that of what I am
simple yet intellectual
discarded of all superficial, materialist objects
my moral may not
my smile made false
manifest in thought
my thoughts spread
not lost of infinite possibility of being
present is now
future is and is not
maybe or maybe not calculated

Submitted: Monday, August 06, 2012
Edited: Monday, August 06, 2012


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  • * Sunprincess * (11/28/2012 12:01:00 AM)

    hope you don't mind if i ask a stupid question..is or is not thoughts a concept

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  • Stevie Taite (8/23/2012 1:42:00 AM)

    I can see that you think a lot and spend a lot of time in your thoughts. I get the impression from your poem that this sometimes worries you. You are not sure whether fate controls us or if there is such a thing as fate atall! Your words mean this to me and I connect with them in this way! ; -)

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  • Ngwa Louis (8/9/2012 3:56:00 PM)

    Good poem men, most of the times when we face some challenges in life we tend to doubt our abilities yet there is always a reason to trust in oneself for no one can believe in you better than your own self. Keep it up but i believe you can do better! ! ! lol

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  • Ellias Anderson (8/9/2012 12:20:00 AM)

    nice meaning and so interesting. i like the way that you write this poem.
    nice work.

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