To A Cloudy Day Poem by April Lane

To A Cloudy Day

Rating: 4.5


Formless realm of my spirit eternal
Why dost keep forever in thy palm
Such a wealth of golden rays diurnal
Robbing me of nature's richest balm?
Pale and weak, a listless wretch I must wait
Beholding not of Phoebus a wink
Confined to earth my daydreams suffocate
Closer to oblivion I sink
Alas for wings to rise above the rain
Wander heaven's hallways with the dove
Up past all reach of dreariness and pain
To bask in the pure light from above
But time's lofty haven where the heart is healed
Lies forever out of sight by mists concealed

Saturday, November 7, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: cloudy,flying,light
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 27 November 2015

Beautiful train of thought, well articulated and nicely penned in Shakespearean sonnet rhyme scheme with spiritual insight. An elusive hope of one at very low ebb of life, seeking for divine intervention is well depicted in the poem. A lovely piece indeed. Thanks for sharing April. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kelly Kurt 08 November 2015

Beautifully written, April. Thanks

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Chuy Amante 07 November 2015

but heal it can and be like new the other alternative would be heart stew very nice write April Lane nice name too blessings

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Anil Kumar Panda 07 November 2015

Rich with vocabulary it is a well composed poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 07 November 2015

A lovely poem with a beautiful flight of imagery. Enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.8 points.

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