Aufie Zophy

Bronze Star - 2,523 Points (18 October 1964)

To Our Amazing Creator - Poem by Aufie Zophy

Our Amazing Creator, so full of Grace,
So full of Forgiveness and Fatherly Traits
Lots of Praise and lots of Thanks we give
For this Wonderful World and the Fact that we Live.

We dream of Your Kingdom
Somehow It will come
Somewhere in the World or high in the Sky
We will see Its full Glory after we die.

Amazing Creator of Night and of Day,
To You we ask for help and to You do we pray,
Help us to serve You however we may,
Help us to see and do all things in Your way.

This little prayer, how small it may be
I hope it will help me, help me to see
To see all the things that You'd like me to do
To help where I can and be faithful to You

(Bachok,19 May,2010)

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

if we manage to pray with meaning, it is a whole new experience

Comments about To Our Amazing Creator by Aufie Zophy

  • Gold Star - 28,070 Points Chinedu Dike (1/14/2015 2:20:00 AM)

    A well articulated devotional poem to the HIGH AND LOFTY ONE - GOD ALMIGHTY. A beautiful pray showing Total Submission to His Will. A lovely piece indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please my poem THE PHOENIX STRANGLER. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 28 Points Ekaterina M. Polischuk (3/30/2012 1:24:00 PM)

    amazing verse! i hove no words to describe my attitude to the poem, because it is perfect in its meaning. it contains a great mystery and bright light energy, that can change our imagination about life treasure) . wonderful poem) i love it very much. bravo (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lynn Glover (6/9/2010 7:40:00 PM)

    I love this poem, Aufie, and hope you don't mind if I say it also for me. I love the inspirational and uplifting tone of the poem and along with just great rhyming scheme. A very nice poem better than a 10. Your friend Lynn (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jeesa Rose (5/29/2010 12:52:00 AM)

    Amazing Creator of Night and of Day,
    To You we ask for help and to You do we pray,

    it is a beautiful prayer. Happy to know that you are a religious poet. the desire for God fill our hearts more than anything. thank you (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Yoonoos Peerbocus (5/28/2010 11:36:00 PM)

    deep thought investment/fine to ponder on (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 6 Points Dr.tony Brahmin (5/28/2010 4:28:00 PM)

    Amazing Creator of Night and of Day,
    To You we ask for help and to You do we pray,
    Help us to serve You however we may,
    Help us to see and do all things in Your way.

    you are very religious. Spiritual minded poets can offer a lot to the humanity (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Denise Bekker ~* The Sound *~ (5/28/2010 12:49:00 AM)

    Absolutely wonderful. Love this poem. Love Creation (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 26 Points Gita Ashok (5/24/2010 11:47:00 AM)

    Amazing Creator of Night and of Day,
    To You we ask for help and to You do we pray,
    Help us to serve You however we may,
    Help us to see and do all things in Your way.

    Beautiful poem. 'Night and Day' could also be interpreted as suffering and joy here. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Amrit Rathi (5/20/2010 5:07:00 AM)

    [Our Amazing Creator, so full of Grace,
    So full of Forgiveness and Fatherly Traits
    Lots of Praise] -divine grace is great which we can invoke with clear heart and prayers in his praise from the dept of our hearts!
    Take look at my poems- I'm the happiness, and The life's a celebration!
    at http: //www.poemhunter.com/amrit-rathi/ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 19, 2010

Poem Edited: Tuesday, November 20, 2012


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