Aufie Zophy

Gold Star - 5,183 Points (18 October 1964)

Soothing Sea Sounds - Poem by Aufie Zophy

Soothing, breaking one by one,
Peaceful brushing on the shore
In crescendo and then back down
My soul is asking for much more

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Sea, sea sea sea sea sea
Sea, sea sea sea sea sea
Sea, sea sea sea sea sea
Sea, sea sea sea sea sea
Sea, sea sea sea sea sea
Sea, sea sea sea sea sea
Sea, sea sea sea sea sea
Sea, sea sea sea sea sea
Sea, sea sea sea sea sea

Comments about Soothing Sea Sounds by Aufie Zophy

  • Gold Star - 5,215 Points Walterrean Salley (10/28/2012 3:05:00 AM)

    There is something about the sea that is so mesmerizing. Soothingly, it draws you in. Feels like I’m there. What an experience. Good job. Enjoyed this Hans. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 36,824 Points * Sunprincess * (8/24/2012 4:47:00 AM)

    Those waves keep coming... to sooth our souls. :) (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,669 Points Elena Sandu (7/15/2012 8:33:00 PM)

    Another one of your wonderful poem to touch my soul, yes I feel any kind of water songs soothing. But the sea could keep entire me forever. Thank you! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Pari Dharawat (11/19/2011 10:37:00 AM)

    Nice choice of words, glad i read it, beautiful indeed (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 786 Points Patti Masterman (6/23/2011 3:03:00 PM)

    What a lovely gem of a piece. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 83 Points Miroslava Odalovic (11/6/2010 2:35:00 PM)

    This is beautiful, splashing lines. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Afzal Shauq (9/6/2010 12:37:00 PM)

    lovely and meaningful write with rich story..liked it very much 10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jenny Gordon (9/5/2010 10:41:00 AM)

    It is so poingant, succinct, and bittersweet. I love it! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie steffy samuel (9/2/2010 8:32:00 AM)

    beautifully expressed... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 11 Points Colin J... (7/26/2010 2:46:00 PM)

    Washed away by this...
    Colin J... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 46 Points Sreekala Sukumaran (6/20/2010 4:20:00 AM)

    Well write small poem and precise... well done loved it.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Denise Bekker ~* The Sound *~ (6/15/2010 12:51:00 AM)

    A poem of give and receive..ebb and flow..The return is incomplete.. I loved it! Good one.; D (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 50 Points Gita Ashok (6/7/2010 8:15:00 AM)

    see, sea, crescendo, soothing, soul
    All these have the sound of 'C' in them. I agree with you in that one can never have too much of the sea.
    Short and precise and to the point. Lovely write. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, June 6, 2010

Poem Edited: Friday, March 29, 2013

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