To Us - Dot Com. Poem by Fay Slimm

To Us - Dot Com.

Rating: 5.0


Amazingly woven
These webs of togetherness
Winging the oceons
Laden with line.
Cementing new friendships,
Souls begin meshing
By unseen exchanges
Unsullied by time.

Wonderfully riven
In manifold verses.
Heartfelt or soulful
They speed on their way.
Marking fresh access
To romantic places
Allowing the willing
To have just their say.

Long live the messages
Sent for communing
With beautiful meaning
Our postings of Word.
Hearts become closer
By such intercoursing.
Although never speaking
Our soul's being heard.





Hi to all the lovers of poetry reading and writing on PoemHunter
Keep up the fine spirit you show. Peace and love. from Fay Slimm.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 15 September 2008

A nice poem with the aid of infotech, content is new. I love it and added 10.

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Tango 31 August 2008

So wonderfully put, my how the world has shrunk, with technology. With the webs of togetherness, friendships blossom, and grow. An excellent poem. Tango.

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Tom Balch 16 August 2008

Very nicely done Fay, 'Winging the Oceans' love it. regards Tom

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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