David McLansky

Veteran Poet - 1,044 Points (5/24/1944 / New York City)

to Your Words I Add Wtih Zest - Poem by David McLansky

To your words I add wtih zest
Supporting fully your request,
We the writers, artists, hacks,
Yearn for comments and feedback,
A simple word, a kindly phrase,
It needn't be exalting praise,
It can even be a critique attack,
Reveling in our talent's lack.
Just don't say anything about my mother;
They're very sensitive, my mobbed-up brothers.


Comments about to Your Words I Add Wtih Zest by David McLansky

  • Rookie - 497 Points Elaine Sept (3/4/2014 12:34:00 AM)

    Your wit and charm are sublime!
    xo (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 4,107 Points Diane Hine (2/20/2014 3:36:00 AM)

    Hey, this is molto funny! I haven't laughed so hard since that time I left a horse's head in your Mama's bed. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, February 19, 2014



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