Cheryl Griffith

Rookie - 67 Points (January 2nd 1966 / San Fernando Trinidad and Tobago)

Touched


Who are you to stroll into my life
With such boldness and audacity
Claiming with authority
That I am yours and this is destiny?

How is it your words
Are able to move me beyond words
and touch without touching
The very consciousness that makes me woman?

Submitted: Sunday, January 24, 2010
Edited: Tuesday, January 26, 2010

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  • Silver Star - 9,657 Points Roseann Shawiak (9/3/2014 8:12:00 PM)

    Wow! Love this poem. It is very sensuous and sublime, I can totally identify with this poem. A great write!
    Thank you for sharing it. It is a favorite of mine now. Deserves a 10. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ian Bowen (5/26/2010 9:38:00 AM)

    The double use of 'words' does not work for me. Maybe change to...

    How is it your rhetoric,
    Is able to move me beyond words (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 20,039 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/24/2010 9:07:00 PM)

    How is it your words
    Are able to move me beyond words
    and touch without touching
    The very consciousness that makes me woman.this is how one claims authoriatively on womanfalk when he is sure that he willd lure and draw the woman she wants.. thi is not easily done as feeling is from both sides and nothing can go wrong if it is earnest and pure one....i m moved my themes 10
    read mine love..................at first sight....i miss....cry not (Report) Reply

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