Track Of Loneliness Poem by Pranab K Chakraborty

Track Of Loneliness

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silence plays no pleasing ride
not chaos
a lonely track of befusing
to its last breath
runs simply to make its ruin

man means money
if society you follow
the charm to chariot
meaningless to put its meaning
beyond these the busy track
locates you with definite arrow

day seeks hide
to nights apron
night flows
as stream follows unknown source
the silent origin

but to me
wind blows high
the depth of departing clock
ticks no talk
since its ultimate lock
deadly exists to stupidity
encircled orbit of life and death

lower much lower the templing shadow
the tomb looks high to touch
that sovereign savor
creates or createless
static tranquil

silence plays no good
no chaos plays the evil
the shadow and snobbery
high the hell dreaming the heavn of beauty
man means money
whether alive or dead
dip or drop
saint or salient
the track of loneliness
follows you
to its extreme....

Pranab k c
28/09/2012

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Allemagne Roßmann 02 October 2012

And if only people had understood it through your essence here there would have not been senescence of comments hereby.I always try to endeavour the return back.That does mathematics and computer programs also written somewhat like poems in various ways which we termed geometry, for women -beauty and sexiness, for poem-school, art, form, thematic, for music its genre.The track of loneliness is a reminder to the then newborn that you were nowhere born before recycled from the deceased.Silence and chaos as said they do not only last longer than they are meant to to fulfil some objectives at the cost of doing good and bad in percentages.In reality we see more chaos and seek therefore silence to be a friend to introspect and rethink.The tomb looks high to touch as there are more than significant Vedic mathematics and series of some numbers implicating its outward design than the idea of building it that way or the very purpose.But we examined by time from time to time and we are always short of time in our analyses.The money mongers do linger in some money making peace or try to tranquility but that too ends with the funeral service bureau someday as history trys to speak out from its ruin to others saving it as a guidemap to contain it for further editions in their terms of service..Well penned.

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Kelvin Owusu 28 September 2012

this was an enjoyable read excellently written, each line compliments each other

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