Trap By Devil Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Trap By Devil

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Trap of devil is well laid,
weak mind often fails,
we in our human form
keep this fighting spirit on
with a hope, faith and trust that
Someone Mighty is there to help us.

But taste of blood is so strong
it seldom allows us to give it on
we strive hard as ever yet
Respite to survive against devil
sometimes appears as doping bet
but who can guarantee that we will win.

Like fishermen’s net, it catches the best
And like fish we fall by enjoying little joy
To the unknown land where trade is faired
We jump up and down for innocence to rebound
But lust finally succeeds and we eventually get defeat
The devils are happy for the counts that are crazy

They fancied their chance and now they all dance
Masters are gone and preachers are on.

Tuesday, November 3, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ari Alsio 03 November 2015

Trap of devil is well laid, ...Now then also been caught, thank you.10

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M Asim Nehal 30 November 2015

Thanks much Mr.Ari Alsio

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 November 2015

With a hope faith and trust everything happens with imagination or reality. Thoughtful and wise poem shared here...10

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 November 2015

The traps of life! But, with hope to move on and be safe. Nice work.

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Mannah Shekh 03 November 2015

Very soul touching them... Love the poem nehal ji... Special thanks for the poem.. Allah tayala ne ham sab ko rakkhsa kariye..

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Sanjukta Nag 03 November 2015

Trap of the devil is everywhere to swallow the innocence of mind. A very symbolic poem with various deep imagery. Top marks.

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Loke Kok Yee 03 November 2015

like Adam and Eve eating the apple thanks Asim-10

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