Are you cold? Well tell me, can you believe
Who lives heated in five rooms
Its walls have snowy landscapes
Naked women set apple trees
If you carry charcoal in your basement
A deck of 'Balkans' also unfolds
His burden is our heart, our concern
Taking it on your shoulders is not a fool
The sad thing, don't give up
We cut together for the icy winter
Only spruce springs from the ice
But they are accompanied by faithful companion-hungry
And if they step on our corns now
That our feet swell in our shoes
On you too mult. See, fight for life,
Don't waste your trust
A well penned poem of the day........ Truly exceptional.. Congrats on your featured piece....5 stars *****
A great poem on trust. each stanza is a gem and very enjoyable. 'If you carry charcoal in your basement A deck of 'Balkans' also unfolds His burden is our heart, our concern Taking it on your shoulders is not a fool..'..are beautiful lines. Congrats
On you too mult. See, fight for life, Don't waste your trust /// This is beautiful poem on the encouragement of life; the universe is stable with its natural pace and power; we, the humankind, an essential part of this earth; we have a good cycle of birth and death like the cycling seasons; for the losing past we no need to lose our trust or the confidence which leads us to the peaceful goal; congrats for being selected this poem as POD......from me 5******
If you carry charcoal in your basement A deck of 'Balkans' also unfolds His burden is our heart, our concern Taking it on your shoulders is not a fool A very fine poem conveying trust.. tony
A beautiful poem on life in winter and it's effects on many things. Congrats on poem of the day.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Congrats! A nice poem on trust in a very interesting manner.