Under The Weather Poem by Allenace Muchi

Under The Weather

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A spell of heat rising sharply,
At whatever time I try to flee.
So, I opted not to resist,
To keep still is quite an ease!

Half dreaming, half the pain,
My breath was left in vain.
In awakening hours laid,
Better dropp and shut my gape.

For it's easy when I die away,
No whine, no pain, no cry!

Just asleep.....sssshhhhhh

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For it's easy when I die away, No whine, no pain, no cry! Just asleep.....sssshhhhhh.... oh so much pain in ur poem and anguish too... i appriciate writing in it... honest one i must say....10 read mine..'Miss I miss you' Mary to marry' you go alone' &O mother

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Sameer Ahmed 28 June 2009

A nice predictive poem with foreordainement of the peaceful futuristic theme. The calmness seems to have overwhelmed in the essence of the poem.....

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