Under This Bluest Sky Poem by Unwritten Soul
Under This Bluest Sky
And under this bluest sky, our widest border
for freedom and birds to fly freely
And above this horizontal land along the sea is another boundary
for birds to live and discover life lively
Under this bluest sky
Above land and seas
In this spherical cage (earth)we live with freedom
And still those birds free in such limitation
They are caged but fly happily
But never under few thin steel bars
When borderline was set to care and loves
It never meant to steal freedom from doves
Yes freedom to me is all but to be live in freedom also has some limitation;
first although we can talk anything we shouldnt say something hurtful...and the boundary we set here is respect and love
i do agree some rules are make things suffer, but thats human rules never rules that God make for us, it just to make us better. thus here
i compare of birds life either prisoned by a steel cage or by nature where the cage is spherical call it world, where the boundaries are bluest sky and earthy land and sea.
human set a cage for their needs, their definition of boundary is evolved around that
but some limitation we face is not about our disability but to focus one what we have n to make life excel...forget about what people mind can restrict you, be free as who you are but remember love and respect, God rules are widest enough to keep us living well without being too much. thats my opinion, we may have different thoughts i just shared mine :)
Limitation is not to restrict life from stay lively alive
a real boundary is just not be too much
WE equate freedom to life itself. For what is life if we don't have freedom? Our right to speak, act or think however must be within the purview of what is legal and moral. This is where limitations to this freedom will come in. Freedom is not absolute . There are rules set by God and government to uphold the rule of law. Such rules will maintain stability and prevent chaos.
Cont.... These thoughts and wisdom have been laid down beautifully in this wonderful write. A poem that touches on one of the fundamental issues that affect mankind. Excellently crafted and executed. A favorite and into my Poem List.10
a wonderfully thought provoking poem let free to fly into the bluest of skies? ..............well penned US
Birds are not meant to be in bars, rather they ought to be free in the beautiful spherical cage of earth..Wonderful poem soul
We are, as though, inhabitants of a spherical cage where we ought to abide by some rules and regulations. Although a cage of sorts, we do not usually notice the bars because the cage is a huge one. We enjoy our relative freedom as set forth by the rulers of our respective countries. Birds do not have Governments, in that sense they enjoy more freedom than we do. These thoughts occurred to my mind as I was reading your poem.
I totally share you r views and agree with them, your wisdom here is shining brightly and brilliantly. This world may be likened to a cage but Gid's rules and bounds are best for us. And I like writing poems a lot about not caging birds so I enjoyed your last two lines literally too. Kudos. Pleez do write your thoughts under my newest poem too, titled, dark skinned vs fair skin, I would love to hear your views
I love this poem, Soul. I love the comments. So many people are set out to control us and encage our soul. Let us Love our Creator in a way, so special and unique, that not another person can control.
Thank you, Dear Soul. We all must be thankful to our stars for the freedom showered upon us but the same will be meaningless if we try to deprive others (humans or all living beings) of their legitimate right to freedom. A thought provoking poem. Also thanks for the Notes.
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none can come into or out of life with one's own will. boundaries or limits or cages are foundation of life. how some inorganic matter is bounded in the magic of life. very very beautiful poem friend. and we are free to choose the limits of humanity or not.