Fay Slimm

Rookie - 12 Points (Ageless. / in Cornwall U.K.)

Unfinished Life.

The years can be counted by used love tunes.
Sing me no finished melodies, as like
Dreams their echo of future hope dies soon,
But love sees clearly an unfinished life.

The air still vibrates with rich glowing sparks.
Encounters with friends can stimulate too,
But if in warm core and depth of their heart
Yearning for love is heard, I will hear too.

Unfinished with life is the way to live.
Then when late love calls we naturally give

Submitted: Friday, August 07, 2009
Edited: Sunday, August 23, 2009
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  • Rookie Bob Gibson (8/11/2009 1:05:00 PM)

    hey didle didle, many a good tunes played, on an old fiddle
    the songs of yeteryear they never die, like love, its time they defy (Report) Reply

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