Until I Last Poem by Tirupathi Chandrupatla

Until I Last

Rating: 5.0


The moment You
Delivered Your order
I understood
Your message clearly.

With great inspiration
I undertook the work assigned
I'll accomplish everything desired
With relative ease, I hope.

Your affinity is my joy
Your form is praiseworthy
Your interaction is my good fortune
Your word is very precious to me.

This opportunity is unparalleled
Like snow capped mountain it's huge
Reaching You remains as my goal
Until I last in this world.

Sunday, January 20, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: devotion,prayer
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 05 December 2022

Loved the penultimate stanza. Appreciated the philosophical undertone. Top score.

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Valsa George 02 February 2019

What commitment....! What undivided devotion! Fortunate is the one who can set apart his entire life to discharge the assignments entrusted to him by God! A 10

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Mahtab Bangalee 20 January 2019

holy meeting with God is last goal great loyal feelings // beautiful poem

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 January 2019

We have done deep prayer. God has communicated us and given indication. We have understood everything. God's every word is very precious. An excellent prayer poem is very well penned.10

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