Peter Vector

(untitled Dreams) - Poem by Peter Vector

I dream of them
These mysterious girls in my mind

And yet I can never remember their faces
I never wake with their names on my lips
And all my life I search for only a glimsp
Of their long flowing hair
Or their gleaming playful eyes

These dreams to me are like Heaven
Because I always have a beautiful, wonderful time
We laugh and dance, we hug and kiss
We fly and love, together it seems like a lifetime 

But then these dreams are like Hell
Because I know when I wake
That these dreams that were made
Are just my the whispers of my mind's desire

I dream of them
These mysterious girls in my mind
But alas, never shall I seem them anymore

Comments about (untitled Dreams) by Peter Vector

  • Rookie - 7 Points Mohammad Akmal Nazir (7/8/2011 5:30:00 AM)

    Great poem written well with nice texture and imagery.
    I really liked and rated it 10.
    Thanks for sharing.....
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  • Rookie Kaycie Cooper (7/8/2011 3:10:00 AM)

    Dreaming is like a curse. It's filled with the substance and color of life we yearn for, but in the end we awake, with nothing but a tease ignited in our hearts. There are things so precious to us all that we can only hold in our subconscious, and you've portrayed that beautifully. (: It's difficult to phrase such emotions when speaking of ones dreams, but yet again, you've created something brilliant. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, July 8, 2011

Poem Edited: Friday, July 8, 2011

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