Upon Moonbeams Poem by John Carter Brown

Upon Moonbeams

Rating: 5.0


Upon moonbeams my heart did sing
'Twas you that made it so,
For you and I are everything
Within the midnight glow;
And thus I know that should we fall
No harm can e'er prevail,
Because my love and I stand tall
And onwards ever sail.

(Written Dec 2013)

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Written for a poetry competition on another site (Ooh traitor!) The first line was given, the rest is mine.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 16 January 2014

very nice.......love blossoms upon Moonbeams..............

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Susy Evelyne 01 January 2014

Beautiful! A little work of romantic art.

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Joseph Anderson 31 December 2013

You took that first line and ran for a touchdown. Brief, but lovely- just a 10

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Lorraine Colon 31 December 2013

It's a beautiful poem - I hope you win. Best of luck!

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Valerie Dohren 31 December 2013

Lovely John, very romantic.

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