Valentine Day Poem by Tribhawan Kaul

Valentine Day



Rose
You offer me
Sans thorns.
You
Propose me!
Why should I accept?
Yes, I do love you
And you love me too
I know
Tide is changing
So
I propose you
Will you accept my rose?
With THORNS?
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shahzia Batool 25 February 2014

A poem with an unexpected but realistic turn...! ! !

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Geetha Jayakumar 25 February 2014

A beautiful Valentine proposal. Definitely one will accept rose with thorns only, for life is a combination of pain and joy. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing.

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Wahab Abdul 25 February 2014

without thorns there are no roses....so cute a poem.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 25 February 2014

accept love, notwithstanding its pitfalls...very touching.

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Tribhawan Kaul

Tribhawan Kaul

Srinagar (J & K) India
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