Brianna N R Wine

Rookie - 0 Points (9-29-1995 / USA)

Vanished


The traces of life haven't completely left me yet, but they soon will vanish.
The pain is still there…the hurt still evident.
I don't know how I became a stoic figure of life, but here I am
Life has tramped me in the dirt along with you.
Your feet I felt the most, grinding into me as I was down.
I just want to forget our time together, our brief words
Because that is all there ever was- brief words- but they meant so much.
Words are heavier than any stone and sharper than any stick.
And I need to leave them in the past
And let life trample me instead of you.
So let the traces of life be vanished.

Submitted: Friday, September 14, 2012

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  • Silver Star - 8,525 Points Fabrizio Frosini (12/6/2014 12:04:00 PM)

    let life trample me instead of you... life's has got heavy feet, for sure..
    nice lines (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kelly Seale (9/15/2012 2:33:00 AM)

    wow, this is so deep, so personal... :) your emotins show through to the very core of your heart, your pain at such a lose. I'm impressed! Graet Write Brianna! ; -)
    -Kelly. (Report) Reply

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