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Brianna N R Wine

(9-29-1995 / USA)

Another Upsetting Poem


The sigh ripples from my
Throat before I can stop it.
It is the sigh that I have kept
encased for 16 years.
It sounds of regret,
dripping with loneliness.
It shows the people around me that
I am dissatisfied and the
pity in their eyes, sears my heart.
I don't want their pity,
I want to be noticed.
For once in my life,
I want to be seen for who I am,
not for what I can do…because
if you look close enough-
you will see that I can do nothing.

Submitted: Monday, March 19, 2012
Edited: Monday, March 19, 2012

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  • Thomas A Robinson (11/14/2012 6:10:00 PM)

    bad bad bad attitude! I see a good poem. But poems are a healing salve that cures an ailing heart. Sorry I should not say bad attitude but a healing one. You should write many more poems. That sounds better. (Report) Reply

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