April Swan

Rookie (3/3/95 / san deigo)

Vanity Vs. Personality - Poem by April Swan

Vanity
Beauty
Divine of thee
With those
Eyes of the sea
Golden tresses soft and lovely
Copper skin glowing so vibrantly
And angel to be seen in the
Eyes of envy
But her mouth froths of distaste
That nose turns up in haste
To those who are not to date
But appearances fade
With disgust and age
Only a nasty persona
To acquaint
Lonely she must wait
To fulfill her only fate


Poet's Notes about The Poem

good looks fade
but your personality will always stay the same.

Comments about Vanity Vs. Personality by April Swan

  • Rookie - 1 Points Tiffany M... (12/18/2012 10:18:00 AM)

    This poem was worded amazingly! The imagery was very clear, and it really added to the idea you convey... Vanity vs Personality is a clever title too. I see that many times vanity becomes a prominent trait in those who have it, getting consumed and snobby. Great job! : 3 (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 6,167 Points Hazel Durham (12/3/2012 3:46:00 PM)

    So wise April, we all I'm sure have met people like that! ! So enjoyable to read! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 36 Points Sandy Player (11/30/2012 12:45:00 PM)

    If only everyone realised this...ah well. Its a rich poem.
    It reminds me of Goblin Market (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points Steven Croat (11/29/2012 4:05:00 PM)

    Meaningful good poem. I liked it! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Asif Andalib (11/28/2012 11:04:00 PM)

    Beautiful write April. Keep it up (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 28, 2012

Poem Edited: Monday, December 3, 2012


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