Velvety Love. Poem by Fay Slimm

Velvety Love.

Rating: 5.0


Shimmering rich. it covers all previous
Hurt, warm softness asserts it's own power.
Reflecting light hourly, opulent hue, flowering
From shades of sensuous dyes, blaze the soul.

Falling in careful folds, newly found love
Kisses the heart. Velvet caresses wholly.
Lifts life into lightness. Hope can then move.

Like touching smooth velvet, dreams can revive.
Sinking in lustrous care, love will survive.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Love that is true is alway always like velvet. for it can't but flow smooth and naturally..

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David Threadgold 16 December 2008

Hi Fay. I agree with Andrew it reminds me of blue velvet, and I like your reference to the folds which suggest the warmth. thanks for an enjoyable read Regards Dave T

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 16 December 2008

Keep thinking of that song blue velvet.. wonderful poetry Fay.. Andrew 10

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Kris Smith 16 December 2008

A poem soft as velvet itself and provides the warmth for your future beautiful write Fay 10 ++++ Chris

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Ency Bearis 16 December 2008

very nice eloquent verses and write..lovely...10 Ency Bearis

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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