Venetian Blinds Poem by Mark Heathcote

Venetian Blinds



How much are you proportionally full of hate
Do you wear a scarlet visor around your heart?
Is it even safe to look into your eyes?
I guess you have too many scares

Showing grey, blue through rotting flesh,
I must have been a fool breaking rules
Doing an autopsy; when it's abundantly clear,
Clear all that glitters isn't gold.

Sometimes you must fear what you might find
When you dig for treasure, you open a poison mine
How much hate do you keep inside?
I guess you still have too many scares

Showing grey, blue through rotting flesh,
I must have been a fool breaking rules
Doing an autopsy on you; when it's abundantly clear,
Clear all that glitters isn't gold.

Sometimes you must give up on dreams
Finding an oyster with pearls
How much hate do you keep inside?
I guess you're not ready yet to lift your Venetian blinds.

Thursday, June 13, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: song
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Julia Luber 13 June 2019

Intriguing and good that Mark writes about hate, however politically incorrect it is, it is a basic and sincere human emotion. Poetry should accommodate it with dignity.

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Elena Sandu 13 June 2019

Wow, I don't get to read many poems like this, thank you for share. It feels like an experience for the path of patience?

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