Voices That Won'T Go Away Poem by Faith Riggs

Voices That Won'T Go Away

Rating: 4.5


My life's messed up
And no one knows
The misery behind my woes.
They try to see
But no one finds
The reason why
My eyes aren't dry.
I try to forget
But they come back,
The voices of the
Disserted past.
They nag at me
And never leave
Torment and drive me to insanity.
The only way they'll go away
Is if I go with them someday.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joya Feghaly 15 April 2009

Amazing.... u have a pretty nice way to send your message to the reader.... i like it! ! ! ! Although i agree with kevin: ' you could do better! ! ^_^ ' anyway... keep up the good work! ! !

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James Mclain 08 April 2009

Forgetting and a certain longing to return inside setting free such nice words..thank you..iip

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Martha Mendoza 06 April 2009

this is one of my favs frm u! ! ! !

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Emma Jane Rae 31 March 2009

i love ths poem it is written with such a passion and true emotion well done!

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Kevin Fisher 31 March 2009

I'm the demon of blood and I'll rate this 8 out of 10 its good but you can do better find your inner darkness and release it into the minds of these happy people put them all into a dark depression

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