Elena Sandu


Vortex - Poem by Elena Sandu

Whisper to myself
'I'
and my soul will fly
gazing upon
the seas and oceans.


My whispers says
'You'
and my soul
will roll
down to the core.


Comments about Vortex by Elena Sandu

  • Gold Star - 9,352 Points Amitava Sur (12/5/2014 8:36:00 AM)

    A beautiful feeling of self as how the soul is remaining within so closely and churning like a vortex. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 13,174 Points Ramesh Rai (10/28/2014 1:02:00 PM)

    Short sweet and beautiful (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 14,297 Points * Sunprincess * (10/20/2014 1:01:00 PM)

    ..........perfect title for this poem....love is like a vortex is very imaginative.... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (10/20/2014 9:21:00 AM)

    Fantastic I and you I stood for self love that is within and you stood for you my love is for you and your love is for me..love rolls like that thank you (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 16, 2014

Poem Edited: Friday, October 17, 2014


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