Elena Sandu


Vortex - Poem by Elena Sandu

Whisper to myself
'I'
and my soul will fly
gazing upon
the seas and oceans.


My whispers says
'You'
and my soul
will roll down
to the core.

Topic(s) of this poem: love


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Oneness. Our soul could be, or already is one with everything, maybe huge difference might come from matters of our conscience in motion? Many people praise stillness, yet I wonder is there such think as absolute stillness? I guess not. I guess we just live in constant motion, a rotation that brings us to try acknowledge everything, and everything is brought, to deeper the sense of ' us '.

Comments about Vortex by Elena Sandu

  • Amitava Sur (12/5/2014 8:36:00 AM)


    A beautiful feeling of self as how the soul is remaining within so closely and churning like a vortex. (Report) Reply

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  • Ramesh Rai (10/28/2014 1:02:00 PM)


    Short sweet and beautiful (Report) Reply

  • (10/20/2014 1:01:00 PM)


    ..........perfect title for this poem....love is like a vortex is very imaginative.... (Report) Reply

  • Aftab Alam Khursheed (10/20/2014 9:21:00 AM)


    Fantastic I and you I stood for self love that is within and you stood for you my love is for you and your love is for me..love rolls like that thank you (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 16, 2014

Poem Edited: Monday, August 29, 2016


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