Zaini khalil

Rookie (23 September / multan punjab pakistan)

Walking by the river

Walking by the river
I just realized
The way it is flowing
Its all so smooth

It is carrying with it
Boats and many other stuff
It is home to aquatic life
Providing them wih all the facilities to live

Just like this I again realize
Everything needs a shelter
But what about the people without shelter

Then I begin to wonder
How do they survive
How do they cope up
With changing seasons and changing climates

But God leaves no one without protection
He is the caring one
He is the guardian
He loves us all

Submitted: Sunday, January 27, 2013

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  • Gold Star - 11,774 Points Ramesh Rai (3/13/2013 10:46:00 PM)

    Sorry for delay. you have made a nice compose. keep it up my boy. may god bless you. top marks. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points X X Uniccjonr X X (2/15/2013 2:21:00 PM)

    Smooth and soothing. A fragrance, and yet, tastefully faithful. I do love the idea. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sangnam Nam (2/11/2013 12:55:00 AM)

    God is like the river the provider for all creatures for He is the one who created them all..
    The river flows gave you the insight on God's plans.. nice (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 20 Points Akanksha Bhatt (2/2/2013 2:26:00 AM)

    a very nice penned poem by you my friend.... yeah.. it is right that GOD is the Father of all of us.. He cares about each and every person in this whole world...! i liked the poem very much..! thanks for inviting..! :) (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,742 Points Babatunde Aremu (2/1/2013 6:08:00 AM)


  • Silver Star - 4,074 Points Hazel Durham (1/31/2013 7:42:00 AM)

    With God's help we have power and hope, you have got the message across so powerfully in this beautiful poem! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Td2makati Kelebogile (1/29/2013 4:10:00 PM)

    true expression, i like it............. Good job (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kamran Qureshi (1/29/2013 1:51:00 PM)

    So true! He provides for all, same as he tests us all by deliberately keeping some more fortunate than others. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 288 Points Nasarudheen Parameswaran (1/29/2013 10:19:00 AM)

    Aslamu alaikum, Zaini, your poetic presentatin is very beautiful.Yes. Right. God loves all. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,368 Points Rohit Sapra (1/28/2013 3:35:00 PM)

    Something which I liked about this poem is the simplicity with which it is written. Keep On Writing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 69 Points Hamid Negah (1/28/2013 2:44:00 PM)

    very good poem, i loved it so much, keep writting. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Søren Valentine (1/28/2013 2:09:00 PM)

    I liked this poem the imagery was nice as well as the message (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Barbara Nixon (1/28/2013 4:02:00 AM)

    Lovely poem, very thoughtful and written. Good work. (Report) Reply

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