Wanting You Poem by Demetrius Shore

Wanting You



As I sit here & write this, I think to myself, what if it was just you and I together as one, and how perfect it would be. Then I fall back to reality, realizing that's it all just a dream, a dream that I wish could come true.because if you knew how much I wanted you.you would have been made that move. But you been through so much. You dont know who to trust.its crazy how these bad guys mess it up for the good guys.now you think we all be in disguise and living lies, you still have a guard up that's hard as steel. But I dont plan on goin anywhere until you finally realize that everything I ever told you was real, and if not then I'm going to need some time so my heart could heal, the way I be ready everyday to go class, you would have thought I Love math, but its you I want to see, I wish forever it can last, you have my mind infactuated, to the point where I'm realizing that 'U' is the only important letter in the alphabet, I just want to be the one to show you something different, because I love you intellect.because what you about you get my up most respect, you may think why do I want you or why do I even care, its because ur everything I want & more, they say Friday the 13th is the unluckiest day of the year, not for me, because that's the day we met, which is something I will NEVER regret.hopefully you will soon understand, & finally give me a chance, let's have a true romance.I swear I never in my life wanted to be in another mans shoes, but there is a first for everything, because if I knew you like he did then you never would of heard of me, or him, if that confused you, how can he be your winner if he was willing to loose you? Just take some time and think it through, no pressure at all, you say you heard it all before, well you haven't heard it from me, so just allow me to prove.just take my hand & let me hold you, & we can jus discuss those things that you dream.I known you for a while but I noticed more than your style.and all that time spent with you was worth while, but seriously if you was my girl and i was your man, imagine, a walk hand in hand, across the lands, to hawaiian beaches of black soft sands, then i can only try to make you understand, when you take my hand, what I'm telling you is real.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem is about a girl I met in my class. We started hanging out and I ended up catching feelings for her. But she been through so much she didnt want to go down that road again.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adeline Foster 03 October 2012

An interesting bit of prose, although it could do with a spell-check. Read mine. Adeline

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