War Zoned Poem by Ted Sheridan

War Zoned

Rating: 5.0


I was gone for weeks this time and nobody missed me
It was just like the last time when I disappeared
Into the deep dark and dangerous jungle for a year
And when I finally emerged alive and well
My hair was long and my beard hid my face from view
No one recognized me as a wounded warrior but instead
Chose to see me as just another escaped animal
That needed to be caged or quarantined for my own protection
Because in all likelihood I had become a real killer
I had blood stains on my hands and my breath smelled like death
My teeth were sharp and my even sharper eyes x-rayed my chosen prey
I could count the ribs on my side with my fingerless hands
And I was extremely hungry for anything that moved
It was then I knew for sure that I would never be able to adapt
To a civilized world in which people pretended not to know
Where the bodies are all buried
Yet they erect a monument to commemorate the atrocities
Committed on their behalf….


(2007)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Madness and civilisation indeed. Hard-hitting and provoking and spot on as ever Ted. t x

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Alison Cassidy 06 November 2007

Irony agonizingly penned. Brilliant in your face poetry. love, Allie xxxx

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delilah contrapunctal 05 November 2007

Powerful and brilliant work, Ted........thankyou..... Be well.... Best, D.

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Love Poetry Hate Racism 05 November 2007

Yet they erect a monument to commemorate the atrocities Committed on their behalf great write ted i missed you my friend.. and so do those who are attached to you..

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Ivan Donn Carswell 05 November 2007

It is always the hardest truth to tell. You've done so without artifice and in a strong blank verse which echoes 'Zonk' feelings... Cool. Rgds, Ivan

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