Watch Poem by ramesh rai

Watch

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My watch is my great foe
watching my all actions
giggles on my failure
compact on my success

Moves very fast
during my pleaure
but during my pain
it is very slow

When I want to concentrate
for any creativity
starts ticking me off
your time is out

It is never stationary
always creating havoc
breaks my silence
makes me puzzled

But my Lord has given me
as a caretaker of my life
I can not throw it out
is the shadow of my life.

Thursday, September 18, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: humour
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amitava Sur 23 September 2014

It.s a nice poem detailing this strange watch given to each one of us as a caretaker.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 20 September 2014

It is never stationary... A great watch which always works. The new watches are smart. They measure pulse and body condition and how much one works out. We already have enough problems with the basic one. Great write. I enjoyed.

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Khalida Bano Ali 20 September 2014

Voice of self accounting heart beats.

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Akhtar Jawad 19 September 2014

But my Lord has given me as a caretaker of my life I can not throw it out is the shadow of my life. A lovely poem, I agree we are caretakers of our lives and those who regret it and commit suicide are cowards.

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