We Remain Afloat Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

We Remain Afloat

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We remain afloat

Each bright day ends
And sends
Fresh appraisal
To think as an individual

You have time to look back
Correct the action in book
Write down with new day's start
And make it as permanent part

Not all days pass smoothly
But occur regularly
To remind us that time is main factor
We should seize the opportunity and go for

No one shall guide
Or confide
But you got to take split second decision
That too with precision

Gone are the days
And may suggest dome corrective ways
It is for us to lie down and think
How best can we remain afloat and not sink

We Remain Afloat
Friday, April 29, 2016
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 April 2016

welcome R P mehta Unlike · Reply · 1 · Just now 11 hours ago

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Ratnakar Mandlik 30 April 2016

Beautiful nuggets of wisdom given in the form of a poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 April 2016

Gone are the days And may suggest dome corrective ways It is for us to lie down and think How best can we remain afloat and not sink

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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