We Remained Dry In The Rain Poem by M. Asim Nehal
We Remained Dry In The Rain
Yes, it was raining
When I first met you
I saw umpteen desires
Dancing in your eyes
Ready to unite
with my thirsty deep vision
like misty clouds roaring to charge.
your quivering lips
were ready to burst it's hidden honey
On my chilling cheeks
Your heart was beating all the drums
That I never heard anytime
And then they whispered the love notes
Making me numb between your starry arms
as if we are meeting after last heavenly meet
where ribs were tied together
with single heart beating for two bodies
the rain of love showered whole night
and our hearts were crawling under the moonlight
yet it could not let us wet
our body soaked the love
and we remained dry in the rain.
Love is very powerful! Not even the rain can stop it. Nice work.
You are among the few, alongside my friend Akhtar, that can write wonderful love poems
Lovely poem. Meeting at rainy night and not feeling anything exepct love. This is sweet concep. I liked it.
The rain of love descendeth from above, but becomes dry being earthly and sensual..........Nehalji.......this is very well expressed........thanks for sharing.........10+++++
Beautiful poem....love is Devine until it is free from self centeredness and ego....loved it....thank you for sharing :)
Beautiful sensitive and sensual poem, very nicely penned transporting the readers into the love land. My compliments for this romantic poem.10+++
Wow..wow. That's an enchanting poem. You really are at your best when you write on love. Full of sensual imagery, this poem is really intoxicating.10 of course.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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I am with Kelly Asim.. Only you and Akhtar sahab can write such brillaint verses on love.. Thank you for sharing.