Welcome Bri. My Coconut Tree Poem by Akhtar Jawad
Welcome Bri. My Coconut Tree
Living in US a vast country,
Not so easy where there is entry,
But Bri is a fruit of this tree at a beach,
Very few know how much he can teach,
Touching the skies like a coconut tree,
How deep are the roots; it's a mystery,
But I am interested in a sweet fruit inside,
So I am not afraid of hardness outside,
Filled in with a sweet fluid like a mother's breast,
Washes my English, as a good teacher he is the best!
Beautiful tribute poem on Bri Edwards Yeah I think also that Bri Edwards is wise poet and most brilliant constructive critic in this site Often I read his poem though I never do comment on his poem
Your poem's 2nd line stumps me good; I'd rewrite it for YOU, Akhtar, if I could. But mostly I find your poem to be fine. I sip it from your pen like a sweet wine. Yes, to many, I, Bri, may be a mystery. That's OK, as I'll go down in history..... as my friend Akhtar's faithful teacher, while he, for me, is a trusted preacher. (February...1st...2020) bri :)
So well writ, and it so well fits one called Bri, it leaves all other humour dry, ... Yes, sometimes he makes wonder if there's in my brain just wool, and makes me feel if I should go back to a Grammar School. Well done Akhtar Saa'b.
A great tribute to Bri Edwards. Yes, Bri Edwards has a unique pen that can make us laugh with his amazing humorous write. His reviews carry great insight and he has a keen eye in English grammar.
Akhtar Sahab, this is a very fine poem. Yes, Bri is an expert in English Grammar and a very good teacher. He is a teacher to many in Poem Hunter. Truly, He is a fruit tree.......10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/5/2024 1:41:39 PM # 1.0.0.1119
I love my great friend Bri Edwards.