In spite of big bribes given to me,
I understand this is just temporary.
Mindfulness! it brightens my brain.
Dare to welcome any gain.
In spite of being destroyed in soil,
I can stand with stars in my eyes.
Mindfulness! it's my secret suit.
Dare to welcome any lose.
In spite of pukka popularity,
I understand this won't be eternally.
Mindfulness! it directs not to be vain.
Dare to welcome any fame.
In spite of lowest position,
I can stand with brave actions.
Mindfulness! it shows how to maintain.
Dare to welcome any defame.
In spite of speaking in honor of me,
I understand I shouldn't respond conceitedly.
Mindfulness! it's the best way to face.
Dare to welcome any praise.
In spite of gossip to me,
I can stand without depravity.
Mindfulness! it's trump card for my aim.
Dare to welcome any blame.
In spite of typical tycoon,
I understand all will dissolve soon.
Mindfulness! it's my fortune-calculator.
Dare to welcome any pleasure.
In spite of abysmal poverty,
I can stand with honesty.
Mindfulness! it guides me to tame.
Dare to welcome any pain.
The poem's sutrecture is perfect, the way you express your thoughts, your feelings, it's very very effective, the meanings are clear like stars in a cloudless night, But I think the suitable title is Mindfulness coz in your poem the idea that you insist on, is the value of Mindfulness, that's why suggested, Finnally, I found your this poem awesome, and sparkling.well done, and good writting go on.
Good work to read and appreciate. Fate is in our hands for sure. what ever we do will be appear and answered in the future! but the fate is changeable! Nice one dude!
Thoughtful poem and written in a fantastic fashion. Loved it.
This is such a great insight into how mindful you are! A smart write and penned mindfully. Love it! I enjoyed it because of its flow and daring welcome!
Very ineresting. I like the transition from good to bad when u spoke of mindfulness. Very well written.
I like your poem. Mindfulness is very important and is key to everything in life. I give it a rating of 9.
greatness and tribulation for our endeavours are always welcome, but it is still important to remember who we are inside and stick with the principles that got us to the level we are at, well written.
Such an in depth heartfelt write. I so love the expression and content of this piece. Well done indeed
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
An amazingly thought provoking piece, i think the overall message is to me despite of everything, it is all temporary like shifting sand....i wonder if the last word in the second stanza might be a typo of loss? other than that, i could never write a piece such as this... well done, im in awe...tyvm karen